Wow..i really liked this poem..it reminds me of a friend of mine..she cuts and i worry about her..but ne way..this is a great poem....Love Joclyn

Wow.. i'm so sorry.. please hang in there.. but amazing poem, again. Great job.. and go ahead and email me if you ever need someone to talk to.

This poem is AWESOME. I don't have anything to say about it really, it is soo goood. but, there might be one thing but I think it is just me,

The ending:

Blackness swirling around me,
Clouding my thoughts, my mind,
I drift into that darkness,
Leaving my body behind...

For some reason I think it is kind of weak.

Great poem 5/5 !

Wow...This poem is absolutely amazing! It's the first one I clicked on...and i cannot wait to read the rest! ~Stephanie