I liked this a lot... maybe it's just because I'm a big fan of the dark stuff... I like the imagery involved a lot more. I think of archaic structures or old gothic churches with panes of stained glass 10 feet tall... I do very much like this piece.

-Dano

BEAUTIFUL piece. Your imagery was thick, and it surrounded me as I read on. I could feel your emotion and see into your thoughts...keep writing...it is truely your gift...God bless...

Wow~ how are you so good?!
i love your writing and i love the this poem a lot!
thanks for all the comments too ^_^