Oh, sad poem =(
i liked it, well written

pili

Hell is frozen.
Heavens on fire

what great lines.

i'm packing my bags as we speak.

I think this is so cool! and the comments just give it the full effect! disorientated, whoever u are, you are a fool. she likes you damnit! take the change! chance, take it, chanel.

Dude, this is a great poem, obviously fueld by something outstanding in your emotional life. the emotion is clear, the rhythm is strong, and there are some genious lines in this. very good :)

ralb