Very good poem...I like it....it has a nice flow and I can really feel the emotion...you're really talented as a writer....

Very good. i enjoyed it alot

Very gd your a talented writer

Its a good poem. I dont think its great but good effort and It sounds like you were sad when you wrote it

This is so powerful! You are a good writer, keep it up!

Mallori

GReat poem.. I especially liked the 3rd stanza. It was good.

Realistic and very touching. I liked it. Well done =)

Much love and God bless,
Fallen.

I like how you compare him to a puzzle piece, and how youre incomplete without him. a very strong message, and a 5/5 from me

The piece that I need to finish,
The piece that will keep me going,
The piece that is missing in my life,
Is you.

^ I love that! This is a great poem. Very good job! I have been there before so I can relate, but for 5 months now...I've never been happier. Thanx for the comment. 5/5