I love the end. the beginning just sounds like prose... but then it develops into something. its got a rhythm and a good point. i dont really like the grocery cart deally. good job. it doesn't click for me until the end.

I like this poem. It explains that what you do is not who you are.

Excellent poem. =) 5/5

Excellent! i truly loved it. And i have barracaded my heart...but i like your work keep it up!

Very Interesting poem really Unique Different in Idea and composition i like it thank you for sharing it
take care always
~Neil~!

Amazing poem keep up the awesome work.

I love it hun=) ur a really tallented poet
5/5 keep eriting and i'll keep reading =)
Damionxxx

Really good, reminds me of my own story

Hmm...... Okay.

Very good poem, the emotion sucks me into it haha. But yea I liked it a lot

Wow so much emotion its so cool
i love this poem
5/5
amazing i swear this is the best poem ive read today lol
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I think this poem is o.k. 2 tell da truth!! But its kinda good... well c/b

Well said!!!
keep writting

I like it!!! umm no i dont have a boyfriend....one or 2 of them r about my best friend stephen...

That is a great poem keep up the good work.. it sounds like a rap

I thought that this was interesting, it had a good topic and i like the question that you are asking.. the rhymes worked well and the descriptions were good.

you untill your black and blue.
^ here, it should be "you're" not "your"

good job! 5/5

You really know how to go and pull the words out of other people and make them your own! sorry i think that came out wrong! 5/5 again!

I really loved the last couple of sentences...i have asked someone that question once beofre and they said all the other things like you explained here..but that wasn't the question..so i understand what your saying! great job

This poem speaks to me...I dont know..I feel like that...i dont know what i would say...great poem..it makes you think...
Emma 5/5

I liked the poem, the thoughts were different, it wouldnt be something i'd write but it was really good. the questions were phrased well and it was very good
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