Srry about your grandfather... at least, i know that he'll be proud of you for writing this beautifully written poem. you should be grateful that he's up there... watching over you. keep your chin up and don't let anything get you down. the one for you out there is somewhere... ;D 5/5

Thats saaaaaaaaaaaaaad

Oh bless =( i know how u feel hun=(
i dosen't hurt forever though=)
good honest poem hun=) keep writing
Damion... x

It doesn't really seem like a poem. There is not any flow or construction to it........