I really like this poem because it goes into description about how their feeling, and it just makes you feel like you are THERE in the room watching them say these things

Ur a great writer

Ur a great writer

This poem is so sad but i loved it keep up the good work you have a talent for this i give it 5/5

Hey.
thats so sad she has a life threating condition, I know how you must feel.
I hope she gets better, she will...She seems strong!!
Keep writing your great.
SNTR

Oh , i like it alot
nice job.

This is a really good poem keep up the great work

JC

THIS IS A GOOD POEM CHECK OUT SOME MORE OF MINE YOU WILL LIKE THEM!!!

I loved it... it sounded like someone dear to you just passed or something. if there is a problem hope you get better.

Aww this is a good poem but very sad. I feel you in this one.

Ur amazinnnggg!!!! mwah mwah mwah!!!! much luff

This is amazing, keep writing, i think you really have a talent for this!

Very well written and expressed poem, yuo really expressed the emotions in a powerful manor. welld one.

5/5

hope your neice will be ok

All of your poetry is depressing, but yet full of talent. Bravo. Hopefully,your niece will get better soon. Such situations are very painful, as you have portrayed in your poem. I sincerely hope everything goes well. Again, good job!

Damn this poem is sad. i have a neice too and shes 4 yrs old idk wat i would do if anything happened to her. good poem i like it

That was so sad but really cute at the same time. I hope that she feels better soon! nicely writen~