Wow this is an amazing poem... your a teriffic writer... the only problem with this was there are a few spelling mistakes but thats ok because everything else was wonderful... keep it up!

sammie

Wow this is an amazing poem... your a teriffic writer... the only problem with this was there are a few spelling mistakes but thats ok because everything else was wonderful... keep it up!

sammie

I liked it alot.. and i though it was touching.. i cant do much critiquing im jsut not good at this .. but i did vote. even if you didnt vote on mine, *5/5*

This was definitely enjoyable!! I liked how you used love and vulnerability together as a topic!! They definitely go hand and hand!! Great job!!