Ok then is that about suzie cause its very good
I dont know how to comment good

Great poem...I loved the concept. Your diction and flow was flawless. Very thought provoing write with much visionary passion.

Regards
Hayley

Ok
flow was of excellence
meaning behind the poem was felt
and depth was displayed through-out
all ingredients for a great poem
bon apetite
lol
that was SO bad
Em
with the h*u*m*p*y guy
lol