Ok........this gave me shivers going up and down my spine!!! Fantastic!!! I don't know how you do it but girl all your words just flow perfectly together!!!
luv jess xoxo

OMg brit these are great poems!! your such a great poet!!!

This is a great great great poem! It's a great idea and the way u have exressed yourself is great! I saw your comment on the thread about cutting and drugs and stuff and I feel the same way.. I don't see how hurting yourself helps... it just makes things worse... anyways... great poem and btw did you leave a comment on your own poem!?
Imi
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