Comments : That Night...

  • 18 years ago

    by Pisces Poet

    Baby I am so sorry, I never meant to hurt you.....what I meant was...Ena would have never made you feel like this....that's why I said you should have stayed with her...I am so sorry and yo amor tu!!! kiss kiss

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    "but no sound, unless you are able to
    hear a hear a heart brake and cry."

    this part was my favorite
    well done

  • 18 years ago

    by monika

    WOW... great poem i alwayz thought that poems arent good without real good rhymings well u just proved 2 me dat i was wrong!!! keep up da good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Marlysha

    That was really nice keon you must really care for this person

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Sad, but written with love! Great job on this one! I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Whitley

    Hey nice poem and um thanks for being a friend but my life isnt really like that thanks for the comment and i really liked yur poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Hear a hear a heart brake and cry
    ^^ I don't think it's supposed to be that.. But all in all a great poem and love is hard sometimes but it is worth it..

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Very sad! i know how u feel there... very heart felt...