Want an interesting story that was told in this poem
there was definate flow to everything and the lines seemed to fit into place.
i enjoyed reading this peom

**thanks for the comment, i am sorry that you have the same problem as i do when it comes to guys, i know how bad it hurts
stay strong

-kristin

I love this poem...I could really relate to what was going on. This situation that the poem talks of...it's very similar to a situation that I'm going through now. There was an excellent expression of feeling in this poem. You have true talent, and I give you extra acknowledgement for being able to write such a long poem. I've been trying to write longer poems myself, but they seem to end up losing their original feeling and purpose. Anyway, keep up the good work!