I don't know why but I really really liked this bit:
'Searching for the suffering
knowing what you'll find
the sweetness of peace of mind
From the fear of never ending'

It's really good. It was powerful as well and I really liked the way you ended it. Nice write!

Take Care, Elle xxxx

I really do like your way of writing!
I liked the beginning the most, but the ending rocks! I think you have some talent, and sad to see that you have only two poems online at the moment.
however I will be watching for new ones coming up.

take care,
*~TasH*~

Reality is a confusing subject to think about

It is fully of meaning and very powerful. Great job :)

This is nice..wow, that is one intimidating vocabulary!
I enjoyed the words, it was strange when I stringed them together, but the words themselves, just the phrases, were enjoyable.
Nice work!

//Truest Lies//

Again I like the description in this piece and the ffort taken in it composing.

Keep writing
Nici

You did a great job once again. This poem is amazing.