Comments : Into My Depression

  • 13 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Very true! Great job. 5/5

    -Taylor

  • 13 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great poem. I can really relate to it. I like the second stanza the most.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 13 years ago

    by avery

    There's something about this poem that I just can't figure out.
    I love it.
    It has a lot of feeling into it
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Samantha

    This was a very good poem that expressed a lot of ideas and feelings... the rhyming was a smidge rough though... like in this part" I thought I have a lot of things
    A family, so many friends
    Happiness you think it brings
    But no one understands..."

    i think that you were trying to make this rhyme but it didnt excactly flow... and in this line "But it's not enough"
    try making it's it is not... it might make your poem flow just a small bit more... but that is only my honest opinion... over all nice job though....

    sammie

  • 13 years ago

    by Esther

    Wow!! mindblowingly depressing!