Comments : Just Waint and I'll Be There

  • 18 years ago

    by monika

    JUST LIKE TO SAY THAT IS A VERY UPSETTING POEM BUT THEN THAT MAKES IT GOOD BECAUSE IF A GOOD WRITER MAKES THE READER FEEL THE WAY THE WRITER FEELS THEN THEY ARE DEFINETELY BRILLIANT AT WRITING I BELIEVE THAT WHAT YOU WROTE WAS TRUE AND REALLY DID HAPPEN TO YOU SO IM REALLY SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS JUST HAND IN THERE ALL THE BEST.

  • 18 years ago

    by Borana

    Thank you very much for your comment. But this really didn't happen to me. It happened to my sister and I thought I should put myself in her shoes and write a poem about it. When I showed it to my sister she started crying. But thank you again.

    Love Borana