Awww thats so sweet hunni good work xox rc

Wat a lovely poem :) 5/5

I think your poem is quite good! Honestly it was wonderful. I did however loose track at a few places. Sometimes you had a really long line then a very short line, and then a middle lenght one, it screwed up my rythym when I was reading it. I think poems flow better if you can make it long line/ then short line or try to make them all the same. It's very hard to do but your obviously talented enough to give it a try. I loved the message in your poem, keep up the good work!

I think your poem is quite good! Honestly it was wonderful. I did however loose track at a few places. Sometimes you had a really long line then a very short line, and then a middle lenght one, it screwed up my rythym when I was reading it. I think poems flow better if you can make it long line/ then short line or try to make them all the same. It's very hard to do but your obviously talented enough to give it a try. I loved the message in your poem, keep up the good work!

Good job! keep up the good work!

Aww! means a lot I can tell good one girly

sammi x

0hh hun h0w meaningful. i think al0t 0f pe0ple can relate t0 this 0ne. beautifully written! great j0b! keep up the g0od w0rk! =)