Well at least you and her can talk right? So you are so happy but there sadness because you don’t know if she will ever feels the same. I guess it’s like watching an angel...it’s so perfect you feel happy but also so sad. This poem puts it across real well and I hope everything works out for you...

Very good poem David...I liked it.

What a beautiful poem, just giving this to the lady in the poem would be enough I think. This sounds like something my Fiance could have written a few months before we got together, just for the subject. The flow and rhyming was "perfect" however, the rhyme of love with above is quite typical and over used in love poetry. I think it was the emotion you put into this that pulled it off, because in all honesty there isn't much that is very original, but that doesn't matter too much the emotion IS there. The fourth stanza, second line didn't make sense...maybe something like "Being your friend I'm always there" would sound better. It's up to you anyway.
Keep writing I enjoyed this.

Nice job david. Liked the words and the flow and hope to see your band play at that talent show thing next month.

~Matt~

Wow i really liked this poem! it was so heartfelt and just so sad but perfect at the same time! it was so well written and flowed amazingly... you did a terrific job writing this nice job and a 5/5!

sammie