I really enjoyed reading your poem. its very well written and i love in the poem the determination to get your girl back. its wonderful! :)

Wow that was great! Good luck in getting her back! =)
Check out my poems too, if you've got the time..

Well i lost my gf too... but well i hope i can get her back too,,, and well she wants to be free too,,, and i told her she would be free with me if she ever comes back!!!