Wow, awsome poem. I loved it. very emotional. good job.

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Greta poem, emotional and well written.

think the last line could be improved though, not sure why but it didnt seem to do the poem justice.

I really liked it Ashley, wicked poems you have there. Peace out
Paul

P.S. Do you have msn? jw, if so you should add me ----> flaming_sword_666@hotmail.com, if you want to, ttyl

Wow...Thats a really great poem...i loved it lots...Lots of emotion!
great work hun
Love Julie
xoxox

I enjoy reading your poems, hope you write more in the future and oh I have more peoms now that you can read, ttyl

I absolutely

Great, i love your style x

Excelnt

Great Poem!! LOVED IT!! HYPERNESS!! lolz sorry. I loved this poem great flow and everything!!
LOVE YA!!
Je t'aime,
HJ

Ash! that was AWSOME! i loved it!!!!

~eddy~

Good poem...but i feel it is a bad topic. It truely is a same that good things happen to bad people and bad things happen to good people, I guess that is the way the world is ment to fuction.

I Liked the poem and gave it a Five/Five for the fact that your metaphores were pretty direct and your pattern was abit off but i found you stuck to it very well.

Dark Savior
"Life is a disease and Death is the cure"
Dark Savior(Just some random thought/quote from me)

I loved this one from you! I liked the rhythm and the beat that flows when you read it out loud. It was plain pleasure to read this one and I think you ought to get a 5/5 on this from me (: Keep writing!