Comments : No One Wins a War

  • 14 years ago

    by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~

    Yes it is bumpy and could be writting better! but its the raw truth about war. ok how many times have i commented on ur poems now? u need 2 write sum more for me 2 comment! i luv ur writting..feel free 2 give me critizism on my own