In the 4th to last stanza you wrote got 2 times. Other then that great flow and rhyme. Another one full of emotion. Never lose that.
~~Sweetie

So true. but just know that it does get better. it took me 8 years, but im starting 2 heal a little, and im healing quickly. everything is coming 2gether. and the only reason i still write is 2 get the past out, so its not bottled up inside of me, so i dont have 2 keep thinkin about the past. ima survivor. itll all be okay. ive been thru so much s h i t, n in the end im glad i didnt actually die. itll get better. XoXo