I've said this before but I still don't know if you feel this way. But life is really beautiful and please don't do anything you are going to regret. I tend to get a little depressed and writing helps me, maybe you just need something to let it out with that won't hurt you. If you ever need to talk email me or something!!
~~Sweetie

Nice. i liked the way the sentanes were short and sharp. the simple structure worked well

Ruby

Great poem. i agree with what ruby said.....nno point in me saying it again is there? lol

This was a great poem short and striagt to the point. Hopefully I will find time to read the rest cuz I know they are great! Cant wait to read the rest, keep up the good work!!!

I really really liked this!!
So emotional...and sadly most of it is the truth
Keep up the good work and welcome to my favourites
x

This was filled with so much emotion i loved it you know not everyone is fake so if you ever wanna talk send me a message cuz im here for you. :)

Great poem i like the short snappy sentences 2 but it didnt rhyme i no not all poems need 2 rhyme but i think that would b gd if it did x x x