Hey, good poem by the way...
A very good one, now about the title.. um... Freedom, Now Free..? Please comment on mine! x Thanks

Thats really good 5/5

Good poem. I would try to make it a bit longer though cause you can add so much to this. As for the title, I would probably name it I Am Free, or something else from the poem itself.

Tiffany.xox.

Have to say I like this poem. The only prob I can find with it is that the timing is out in parts. Xx