Aww.
This poem gets you thinking.
I like it a lot.
5/5

Great poem you use so much feeling and emotion, that's what makes a poem good. Only thing is add more punctuation. Other then that fantastic.
~~Sweetie

Wow this si awesome the alst part kinda meh cuz it didnt go id unno but overall 5/5

Well thta gets you thinking. i particularly liked the last stanza.

your rhyms were unforced and flowed wll. great job

Ruby

Amazing poem !

xxx

Very good flowing! I can understand your feeling about life and death... It's a good question:"What is life after death?Why is there such a thing?"
5/5

Thats really intersting 2 think about. really like it. 5/5.

Good poem i totally agree with you. when you die you should stay that way i loved it 5

Terrific poem. i loved it

Wow thats a good point.
.. Great poem .. :D

Nice job 4/5

Hmm i like this. its different. thoughtful. nice job