Yet another great poem.your rhyme is ok and the flow is great.
~~Sweetie

Very nice work. a very visual poem! well done! i think ur use of language gave the poem extra depth.

Ruby

I tought it was a very good poem i am confused to why it is rated so low. ummm any ways keep up the good work 5.5

Short, but powerful poem. Thanks for your comment

I think your dad and my dad should meet cause they already got so much in common...lol...Loved the poem