Comments : Because I love you (revised)

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aww huni:'(!!!
    that is so cute..you have such an enormous heart and great qualities..great actions with your words. I can actually picture you to be the kind of person who would stick to all those things u said.
    So best of luck, i hope you help a lot of people on here, i know you've helped me..
    *hugs*
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Aleesha

    Wow you are so talented. That is a fantastic poem i really like it. Top job thanks luv leesh xo

  • 18 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Hey
    thanks 4 r/c on ma stuff, i'm deff favouriting ya. lol its gud that u understand the real meaning behind fine, wots ur f stand 4 if ya want to tell me, i actually have 2 meanings 4 f, f*%!ed is the one when i'm really made, lol but it is also forgotton alot of the time, i suppose that one fits betta wif me. lol it would be funni if we had the same one lol, anyway ttyl
    eddi
    xoxo

  • Oh huni, thankyou so much for your comment...your words, unlike others mean so much...you are amazingly talented and inspirational. i hope that you fully recover from your cutting and everything else... you sound like a beautiful person... thankyou once again, all my love, liv xx p.s. this poem was amazing. take care

  • U r an amazing writter... i love all your poems... i love the way you rite, u r a awesome chick!! from ur poems i can c u r kind, and caring... ur very talented!!! keep up the work... ur an amazing, beautifull person... i wish there was more ppl like u aronud!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    WOW this an amazing poem, And i hope one day i will be half as good at writing poems Thank You for sharing
    Leona

  • 18 years ago

    by ||.SamanthA.||

    Lovely poem. very inspirational and it brought tears to my eyes! http://www.poetictimes.com/poem/New/Broken_Angel.html?id=47260 there is the link you asked for. if you wanna know what happened between me and James just ask me! hehe! *hugs tight* love you babe!

    love,
    HopeIsDying xx

  • 18 years ago

    by The Spirit of Ash

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    Wow I really loved your poem. I thought it was really sweet :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ||.SamanthA.||

    Erm...well first everything was fine, but then we got into a fight and he had his sister email me saying that he commited suicide which, i put the blame on myself. but then...like a month later, i talk to his GF finding that he is alive and well. i loved him so much, and he betrayed me, and though he did that to me, i'm still in love with him. he's the guy that i compare every other guy to. i know he's in pain right now and it kills me. i just wanted him to know that i do know about his bad side..thats why i wrote the response poem.

    love,
    you know who

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully written poem. I want to thank you for sharing with me, in the comments on my poem. I spent my entire life keeping people at arms length and the one time I let someone in, I get hurt. I am prepared to go back to locking everyone out. I probably won't because I never really lived until this last year, but I also never felt until this year either. Life doesn't come with a user manual or training wheels. Kinda sucks sometimes but it beats the alternative.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Kramer

    That was very touching.... reminds me of my friend who put on a mask to hide from everybody too stupid to see that she was festering on the inside.
    keep up the great work

    _JAY_

  • 18 years ago

    by evangeline

    This poem was incredible! I wouldn't normally enjoy the rhyming pattern but well it was intruiging and fascinating from any perspective, and completely understandable. Love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Lovely poem... nicely done. 5/5