Aww this is sad.. it's deep.. good write..

Great poem keep up the good work
thanks for the comment :)
xoxo robyn

Gr8 poem, thanxs for commentin on mine, i kno how u feel wot eva we do it neva seems to please them

And you said you was just a beginner...you're wrong!!! brilliant poem with lots of emotions 5/5 =)

I love you rhyming scheme.It rocks!

yay. Keep up the good work.

*your

Omg i totally know how you feel! im the oldest of five!