Great poem. very expressive with deep feelings.

sorry about your father leaving like that. some people are just like that, but don't go though life thinking of all guys been like him.

Good poem. It's full of emotion and it flowed really well. Don't go down the wrong path though.. The lasting long term effects aren't worth the short escape... xxx

Excellent poem. I love your writing already!
~*~Heather~*~

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