Very well done. I really loved it. Very very very ggggood. Excellent =)

Aw, Thank you =) xxx

Wow this is really good, thanks for the comment on mine, i know how your feeling too! never quit writing, its a great escape, hugs-hayley

Oh wow, you're a talented writer, amazing poem

Amazing!5/5! keep up the great work xxxxx

Awesome work! its a really gd well written poem, i can relate to it.. keep up the good work 5/5

peace