Wow.. this is deep.. it's really sad.. and I'm sorry your mom wasn't there for you...really good write...

Beautiful and emotional poem.
Sad but so lovely written !

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Oh this is so sad, I feel your pain! It's beautifully written with honesty and I love it! Great job!

Wow, that was like, DEEP. I liked it, you're a great poet, good job, keep it up.

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Thats a great poems, spaces to seperate some thoughts would be a little helpful, but not a must. keep up the good work

WOW is all i can say! That poem is just mind blowing! The wording and rhyming is just amazing. This poem can't improve cause its the BEST! It's officialy my favorite poem ever! Keep it i LOVE your writing!

WOW....this is really deep and emotional you done an excellent job of writing this, Great job wish i could write like that :) 5/5