I understand the point or story that your trying to bring through the poem.
and the storyline is awesome, but it didnt really have a "click" if you know what I mean?
anyways nice try, xoxo take care

Well do you still feel this way or did this change when we got back together i hope its not still like this b/c i love you and i dont' want to lose you not ever
well it really is good and it does click i can read it and understand what you r saying i like it but it needs more structure
krysten