Love it. Hasn't been the first idea like this, but you wrote a very original form with a great twist to think about.
Nice poem..u rock
xoxo

I think there was a little "hiccup" in the last line. "If you -were- the puppet mask"?
If you -wore- the puppet mask?

But the poem I truly loved.
Every line seemed to fit perfectly. I can never seem do that.
Brilliant!!