Really good poem...5/5

Noo dont let them win!!
hun you are amazing, im adding you to my favs...
this poem...god i love it..honestly.
Im actually speachless...
xoxox

Extremely unique and creative, formed a great picture in my head and expressed alot of emotion. Good job. 5/5

Wow that was really really powerful, i found it to be very very well written i really liked it ... i liked this part

So she's falling and falling,
With no hope of peace,
And she'll struggle on through life,
With no hope of release.

a lot very good nice job and keep up the work