Comments : Dead on arrival

  • 18 years ago

    by lOVER

    Wow. ive never read a poem about this kinda thing. its unique. nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, this is so sad, but written beautifully! Great write!

  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Aww, that is actually really sad. but its a really good poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by mookoo

    ^^awesome-ful poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    Aww, this is so moving. really sad, but wonderfully written:)xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    Very good job..... gave me goosebumps..... keep up the good work! lots of snaps w/ 3 thumbs up..hehehe