Like the structure, but the way i understood it you wrote one word, then explained it a little. Is it supposed to be, that the last word isn't explained?
love the mytery, style, idea and everything else about it, 5/5.
dwight

O0oh...nice...new format? Well...it's cool...

Nice job pretty lady. Like the new format and you should continue to write more like this and thanks for the comments.

~Matt~

Very intersting poem....the way it was written intrigues me....I would really like to read more like this....lataz

Very good .... keep it up

Your a great writer in my eyes. 5/5