Wow matt i honestly dont know how u do it.
Wow...
this was my fav bit:
"They say it isn't my fault,
But I know it really is,
Didn't when he grabbed by hand,
I let go of his?"

so amazingly true.
i hope there's more to come..these could and should definately be published..
you're a true talent...

dont ever forget me please...
much love xoxo
anna-cool name:P
xoxo

Oh my gosh matt, that was so unbelievably amazing!! just so sad and written so beautifully.5/5
lots of luv,
xxemxxx

I still can't believe you are only 12 lol...well...the first one is a masterpiece...the second is beyond a masterpiece...you just keep me wow...=)

Hey..sorry double post..BUT..i wrote u that poem:P go check it out (k..it honestly sucks but hey:P)
x x x

YES PART TWO WOOH, OKAY OKAY, CALM, FIRST OF ALL, i love this i love this i love this, so beautiful, Being the age that you are you have exceptional vocabulary in this and i dont not like to judge people by age but wow if you write like this at that age though by the time you're 20 you can take over the writing world seriously, absolutely amazing, I love the verse "You think it's time to end it,
Life can wait a day,
Yet deep inside you know,
'I'll never runaway.'" Aw, wow so can relate right now, well done once again && thank you for those lovely amazing comments :)

Loved the first one and you keep on getting better!!! great work!!!

~loveloveandmorelove~

Hey matt... really great poem 5/5!!!!! i love it.. its really touchin.. plz check out some off mine... luve.. ney ney

Way to GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really liked the poems.
I liked the way you used the words.

Alixia

Beautiful poem, that's all I can say

Off to read part thre!

-Taylor

Omg, thats breathtaking

Wow just wow