You had some real sweet stuff in here... very nice write... try to stay a little more steady with you capitlization... other than that nice work... keep it up!

sammie

Gr8 peom exactly my feeling s to the love of my life, u can only put ait inot words as the rest is so hard to express. u made this clear that love really cant totally be expressd. and i ove the funny bit on the end about his style 10 out of 10 :)

I love how you ended it