Lol thts a good point!! i wrote it in science in year 8, only because we had to write a poem about photosynthesis!! thts probably why its not very deep!! but it does what its supposed to - its a poem about photosynthesis and it rhymes!!! and it inspired me write more, and better!!

Hey i like this. its cute and funny. lol. nice

It was alright, i liked it, dont get me wrong but science was never my best subject so it didnt seem to catch me that much.
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