Thanx for all votes
this poem means alot to me
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sarah x X x

Wow, that was great. I loved the way you expressed the poem and used the perfect words to paint a visual in my mind. Keep it up.

-Chelsea

Hey again loved this one as well. you know how to keep people interested.

Reali good poem. i love the way you've compared love to this, love it!!
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It was good i loved it keep writing more

Wow!! i love the ending!! its such a surprise!!! its amazing!! great job!!! keep it up!! comment back if you would!!

Beautifully penned

Well... to tell the truth it is very detailed, however, it is so detailed that even the most intelligent person would have trouble understanding this poem. Good try ^.^