Hey edds!
wow gud poem dude!
yeah i think u shud do a second part, it wud be gud! kep up gud work
love love love
wessie
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Hey thanks for the comment and your poems are really good...like i think this poem is great the way it is but a part 2 really could add to it...like the feelings or whats going threw her mind...well great job keep it up..

Thanx so.... much for commenting on my poem.......a pretty face............
i enjoyed your poem and when i was younger like 8 i was in the syke till the begining of last year....... i slit my wrists till i passed out and woke up there........