Comments : Drowning (Part III)

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    WOOH =D I was just about to log off then I saw you posted this, omg wooh part 3 weeeh, I love this onee, Its my fave part out of all three, I adore the verse "You said to self again,
    "I tried to not let go,
    He saved me from the depth,
    I killed him, as you know.
    " once again I can definetly relate to this, just pure beauty, You write such pretty words, and I love the storybook you create with all of your poetry hehe, I'm still waiting for a poem book from you, I need to have these poems FOREVER, They're just so pretty well done my dear, take care, xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Damn good...frankly speaking...I'm out of words to say...your poems are just great...you will be a great poet one day...take my word for that...or no...you already are...

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg matt!! (eyes green with envy):P
    you have such awesome writing skills..ahh!!
    i loved this one, probably als appealed to me the most of the 3.
    So amazing.
    id love for u to explain to me thoughs behind these one day...
    love anna:P
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    "The shot without the gun,
    A stab without the knife."

    its just incredible matt, ur writing is amazing. i loved this poem, it was so sad, but just so excellent.
    keep it up!
    luv Emma xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by norman

    Dude sweet they just keep geting better. you got real talnt

  • 18 years ago

    by FNO

    Wow....to be only 12, u have an amazing talent. i have read almost all ur poems and i dare say that u have written some of the best poems i have ever seen! (ur best ones are the drownings 1-3) Excelent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dory

    Wow matt i really like it....uk wuts sad? i read a ton of rape poems/stories on this page and it like..made me cry so much :-(. n e ways....deff more than a 5...if i cold do tht. love ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Off to read the fourth!

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    You are so talented! i dont know how you do it lol! abosluty fooookin AMAZING.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by sandy

    That was incredible! Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by physco

    Awww 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by zadyrose

    Oh i was almost in tears it was so beautiful you creat such images its almost like i see and feel what they feel

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Better than part 2, as good as 1, but all three are incredible and very well written