Wow Kirsty. This is very good! I really loved this poem Kirsty. Wow. It's so amazing. Beatiful writin hun. Excellent. I'm so proud of you =) -xxx-

Beautiful writing kristy....
It encompasses the very feelings of harshness you were trying to convey.....
I wonder if yo could write a poem specifically for me..... One that deals with a lost relationship....

Much luv,
Josh