Verry good poem..thats how i felt with my ex..like nothing could go wrong but i must of been wrong..keep up the good work..i like reading your poems!

~allison

Thats great. It seems like something that I would write about my baby.

Beautifully writtne i kno how u feel bc i feel that exact same way wit my man..keep on lovn! Bec true love nvr dies. xoxo Keep written ur stuff is great!

:) Lissa