Comments : Your Poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    This is exactly how i feel. thanks for writing it :)...my friend showed me a couple of his poems the other day and he said that they werent good but i said "i dont like when people say their poems are bad because its what they feel, so poems are never bad."

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Ohh that is so true : ]] I definantly like what you wrote about but besides that the flow was good and everything penned together nicely. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    EXACTLY!! i know what you are saying! many pple think they cant do it but they r soooo wrong

  • 16 years ago

    by silvershoes

    This poem is decent, but it seems rushed. There are lots of errors and some lines barely make sense. However, I get the topic, and I agree with what you've written. Very inspirational :)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    You may not think your the best
    You may not think YOU'RE the best
    as in you are
    For the then your poems done line I didn't understand it. Maybe THAN your poems done? And for cause' I think it would be *'*cause instead but that doesn't really bug me so splah. It's pretty good otherwise. For the writing from what you feel thing I don't believe we have to do that because the majority of my poems do not come from past experiences or emotions and I think I do quite will with them. It's actually harder for me to write about something that's happened. For something that hasn't it's easy because you can change it around to whatever you want. :) I liked that your poem was about...well poems! :) 4.

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I think that this poem should be read be poet who are down because they think their work is not good. I love the way you are inspiring people to continue writing. really good job xxx alex xxx