Awww.. That is so adorable.. Beautiful, sweetheart! Very well written, and it's really cute.. Lol, keep it up. *hugs*

~Jessica

Really cute...thanks for all of the comments ...you inspire me to write...I wish you had more stuff for me to see to pay you back!
tay

Very good, its very creative. well donr.

Its very good.. these ideas that you have are awesome.. keep posting them in.. i would love to read some more of your's.. take care xox