Comments : Make It

  • 19 years ago

    by dwight

    I liked the poem, but the last line doesn't fit, atleast I think so, it's not as fluent as the rest,
    today you seem to be writing alot :)

    dwight

  • 19 years ago

    by dwight

    I liked the poem, but the last line doesn't fit, atleast I think so, it's not as fluent as the rest,
    today you seem to be writing alot :)

    dwight