Comments : My Fault

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Love it and I know just what you are sayin here I have been through just this keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Awww this was really beautiful!!! I loved it!!! It showed that you are trying to accept things and you did it with grace!! Awsome!!
    luv jess xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awwww thiz poems so sweet n sad but very gud lol keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Gurl as usual alsome i loved it, and it was really touching to.5.0!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very sad yet I don't know it was just a great poem. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    Gurl love the poem keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "your no longer here," =You're

    "i"=I

    "For i never meant to hurt you and i want you to be OK,
    Please don't do nothing stupid to stop you from seeing the light of another day."

    ^^I thought the flow was terribly off in this couplet...maybe try something like

    For I never did mean to hurt you and I just want you to be OK,
    Don't do nothing stupid to stop you from seeing each day.

    I found this to incredibly sweet. Sad yes, but still written with such emotion and depth that it shows your love for the person whom you're writing to.