Comments : Innocent no more

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautiful poem....keep your innocence for as long as you can. Life does enough to taint you and jade you....stay pure, stay innocent....for all the rest of your days...if you can.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Chels ...What the ....
    What's wrong sweets ? I feel so much sadness coming from this write ..

    One group tells me I mean
    A cruel minded person

    Mean ???? cruel minded ????
    I think not !!!
    Chels no matter what others ever think of you does not matter .What matters is (you know who you are and what kind of person you are )
    I have never met you (yet) and I know and feel in my heart that you are one of the sweetest angels .
    Keep your head up Chels .... and those who truly love you .....will love you for who you are ...
    Luv ya A.I.D ....Muah !!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Great poem - I sense some sadness too, I want you to know - we all love you, I don't know you but I know that you are loved and everyone thinks dearly of you. Great work :) Keep smiling, the world WILL smile with you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Chelsey,
    I sense so much pain....we known are perfect but sometimes the harder we try to be good to people some don't appreciate it....Keep that beautiful heart of yours regardless, I have days My heart has been hurt by others but I survive because I know God loves me for who I am....Stay the way you are...and never CHANGE.....You Are A Precious loving young woman...

    Love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Chelsey.....error!
    I meant We none are perfect....sorry...

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Chelsey Chelsey Chelsey, what am I to do with you? What can I say that hasn't already been said. No, you're not perfect, no one is, BUT you are a beautiful young lady with a big beautiful heart. People need to except you for who you are otherwise they are worthless of your friendship. Don't worry about what they think of you, just be you. I know that I love who you are and we've never met. This was a very emotional and heartfelt write and brought tears to my eyes. I hurt because you hurt, so put a smile on that precious face of yours missy and keep on being that beautiful young lady that I know you are. Don't let others bring you down. Big hugs and lots of love to you.....

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Deep..real deep and again something I could relate to in more ways than one. I really connected with this poem..I felt it...its actually similar to what I have been going thru of late and I know how hard it is Chels. Remember you always have your writing and me to vent to when times get tough...your never alone regardless
    Love you Risa xoxo