And honest pleas are what the world lacks, a beautiful poem. Your plea will remind the person that someone does love them.

The Sleeping Ugly

It is abit short, and the poem itself is great, but I find the *text* even better, the poem was 5/5, the rexst 10/5, but unfortunaltly I can only give 5,
dwight

Inspired! Keep it up!

Great poem, the message realy comes across, n yeah at the minute i do wanna giv up!!!!
...bit of advice tho, hope u dont mind...make it a bit longer :)
take care
xx xx

Its really good, but what if, people chose to let go? he let go of happiness, he let go of me, he let go of his future, he let go of himself... he's trying to let go of life itself...

Words are all I can offer, I wish I had more to give. If people choose, then that is for them to do. I can't tell you what to do, but if you ever need to talk about it, I'm here.
*VioletRaven*

Thats beautiful.
I agree with your mention
but still struggle to hold on
and it inspires me to carry on.

Very good poem, wel writtten sucinct and with a strong message

Hey, yeah i do feel like this poem applies to me, i hate to say that but it does!! i just want to tell you though that i think your poems are amasing, i can never write that good!! Well keep it up!! much luv,
~michelle~

I understand this poem, it applies to me in every way, great write

Thanx...

RLS