This Is definatly beter than a 2. I really like the begining of this song. But I would aslo like to state this is a poetry site, so, I wold say it was poetry not a song. Another thing if your not done with the (song) poem do not post it no poin you will just get low balled on Ratings. My favorate part of this peice is in the begining .............. I'll close my eyes again and let myself settle
in the place between my dreams and reality
it's this indecision that leads me nowhere............
I really like that part. Overall a Fair achievement. And I hope you do well and strive in the future.